Can mods please check this out? My song.

spiderwick9 · 2012-06-17 02:03:47

So, I am going to post a song, but I want you mods to tell me if I can. Thanks.

Okay, this is rock and roll. Hope you like it.

Lyrics for: Jack in the Box

I'm your nightmare. I'm your fear. I'm waiting for you to draw-aw near.
You don't know-me.
You don't expect-me.
If you don't FEA-ME,
I'll be ready to pounce.
I'm your dread. I'm your dead. I'm a read-y.
If you don't know-me.
If you don't expect-me.
If you don't FEAR-ME.
I'll be ready to pounce.
Are you ready to beeeeee
I'm-a waiting for a boy to draw near.
I'm-a waiting for a girl to draw near.
And now I'm ready to POUNCE, I'm just a jack in the box.
It's your kill. It's your dead pill. It's a drea-ead bomb.
if you don't know-me.
If you don't expect-me.
If you don't FEAR-ME.
I'll be ready to pounce.
Are you ready to beeeee
I'm waiting for a boy to draw near.
I'm waiting for a girl to draw near.
And now I'm ready to POUNCE!
I'm just a jack in the box.
I'm waiting for him to wind me up.
I'm waiting for her to wind me up.
And now I'm ready to POUNCE!
I'm just a jack in the box.
Are you dead? Are you fear? Are you hear?
Am I death? Am I fear? Am I hear?
Is she dead? Is she fear? Is she hear?
I'm death. I'm fear. I'm ALREADY HERE! (Evil laugh)
if you don't know-me.
If you don't expect-me.
If you don't FEAR-ME.
I'll be ready to pounce.
Are you ready to beeeee
I'm waiting for a boy to draw near.
I'm waiting for a girl to draw near.
And now I'm ready to POUNCE!
I'm just a jack in the box.
I'm waiting for him to wind me up.
I'm waiting for her to wind me up.
And now I'm ready to POUNCE!
I'm just a jack in the box.
I'm waiting for a boy to draw near.
I'm waiting for a girl to draw near.
And now I'm ready to POUNCE!
I'm just a jack in the box.
I'm waiting for him to wind me up.
I'm waiting for her to wind me up.
And now I'm ready to POUNCE!
I'm just a jack in the box.
I'm waiting. I'm a waiting.
I'm a waiting for you!
(Long evil laugh)
I'm a jack in the box

Okay, I hope you liked it. By! fete

bloodyemos · 2012-06-17 02:28:24

The was actually pretty cool. It went right along into my theme of music. I would listen to it. good

spiderwick9 · 2012-06-17 02:46:09

Thanks. I was hoping someone would like it.

torifan562 · 2012-06-17 05:06:50

Wow :) Awesome!Did you create by yourself?

angelfire · 2012-06-17 05:09:26

That was a good song

malu · 2012-06-17 09:13:18

I like it!

spiderwick9 · 2012-06-17 16:26:19

@ Torifan562, Yes I did. I was quite into the creepy feeling.
I so glad everyone likes it!

hayley77 · 2012-06-17 16:31:24

i like it , its cool :)

sleepover97 · 2012-06-17 18:40:21

I like it!! love

Ancien joueur jessywitel · 2012-06-18 22:00:17

That's really cool! applau

amaryllis-love · 2012-06-28 12:30:38

I would really like to listen to it. good

spiderwick9 · 2012-06-28 21:25:25

Thanks guys! I'm really glad everyone likes it.

zoey900 · 2012-07-03 15:47:38

I would love to listen to this song.It's cool

diana83 · 2012-07-09 17:09:48

I would like to listen this song!I like it!!!!!!!!!!! good

spiderwick9 · 2012-08-23 21:29:30

Thank you. I have written some other songs, but I'm not sure if I should post them.

ilovem12 · 2012-08-23 21:35:37

This is such a cool song, I love it ^.^

mallorygoodwin · 2012-08-23 22:07:10

Great song. You should post more. (Thumbs up!)

spiderwick9 · 2012-09-30 02:22:26

Here is a new song I wrote. It's not rock and roll, though. It's called I Love You More Than....

I love you more than ai-ir its self.
I love you more than water and welth.
I love you more then... I've ever loved befo-ore!

You and I, we are so fine, and our love will get better in time. (echo)
Our love will go down in history, I love you so much, don't you see? (echo)

I... should've kno-o-own. You... stole my hea-a-art. I... should've kno-o-own. You... can take my hea-a-art.

I love you more then ai-ir its self.
I love you more then water and Welth.
I love you more then... I've ever loved before!
I love you more then the trees, so tall.
I love you more then grass, so green.
I love you more then, I've ever loved before!

You're a boy, and I'm a girl.
Can't you tell our love is priceless, like a pearl.

And what would I be... without you?
How could I see... without you?
I wouldn't be me... without you.

I love you more than ai-ir its self.
I love you more than water and welth.
I love you more then... I've ever loved befo-ore!
I love you more then the trees, so tall.
I love you more then grass, so green.
I love you more then, I've ever loved before!
I love you more than ai-ir its self.
I love you more than water and welth.
I love you more then... I've ever loved befo-ore!
I love you more then the trees, so tall.
I love you more then grass, so green.
I love you more then, I've ever loved before!
(Ever loved befo-o-ore.)
Then I've ever loved before!

Ever loved befo-o-ore....

Last edited by spiderwick9 (2012-09-30 02:23:35)

malu · 2012-09-30 07:59:41

Aww! Its cute!

spiderwick9 · 2012-12-11 22:57:57

Thank you Malu! (Wow, it's been ages sense I last looked at this post, I didn't even realize anyone had responded. ouf )

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