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Well....I asked a moderator if I can post my song here and they say yes so here's a song I wrote,hope you guys like it :)
I've been there before
Don't enjoy it too much
It's been my place from the very start
But I was really out of touche
Which makes it really obviouse
It's been like this; back and forth
And making me feel so ditched
And I didn't like it too much
And you know it's hurting me inside
But instade of crying I'm smiling it out
Do you know that one day I was just like you
Shinin,glowing each and every single day
Without a care in the world
Yeah I've been there before
Tasted it all,yeah
No matter how this is gonna be
Yeah I've there before (been there before)
Look at me; a true strengh is inside of me
Trying to break through everyday
Even at the simplest things I used to do best
You stole'em from me
Do you know that one day I was just like you
Shinin,glowing each and every day
Without any doubt of me
Yeah,I've been there before
Tasted it all,yeah
Been there before and
Now it's all gone
Just because you're up there
Doesn't mean I'm so down,so down
Just because I'm on my worst days
Doesn't mean I'm so done,so done
Yeah.........oh...........yeah (do you know?)
Do you know that one day I was just like you
Shinin,glowing all the time
Oh I've been there before
Oh yeah maybe it's all gone
Oh but I've been there before
I've been there before.
Ok so this is my song :) I want your honest opinion on it please.
If you have any question about the song or anything just ask and
REMEMBER you honest opinion :D thx
Last edited by sani (2013-01-08 16:33:31)
I thought it was lovely<3
YAY! I've been waiting for this! :D
I like the song! <3
yaa i like it too :D you are great at this ^^
Thanks girls it means a lot to me :))))
great lyrics, rly ;3 But now, I rly need to hear it with music ;3 even only guitar and voice ^^ Yaaa, that would be smthng *.*
@shantte1912:thxx and I have to buy a guitar and train on it :) :))
wow! You're really good! Ever thought of posting this on youtube?
@darkelfqueen: thanks it means a lot <3
O.O
It's beautiful!! I can imagine the music for it too
Thanks a lot guys it just so kind of all of ya and Angel maybe we can sing it together :)