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#1 2013-04-08 19:04:18

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Spider can actually write poems!

So I wrote a poem a couple days ago and, well, here it is:


LOVE

Love is a topic that few understand,
Love is like a visitor from a far off land,
It comes uninvited, and it comes quite sudden.

Most don't understand love, but they think they do,
Love isn't boyfriends and girlfriends, it's hope and what's true,
Love will protect and never fail you.

Girls don't know to wait for a prince,
Love was before the first dawn, and has been since,
But people give their hearts out, and that makes me wince.

Love is the opposite of hurt, I'm sure,
Boys don't realize how they hurt her,
That is something only you can cure.

I live my heart out,
But never give my heart out.
Love is hard to explain so don't make me shout.

So whatever you choose, try to save your heart,
Your body will thank you in every single part.
And remember, love is something you must wait to start.


Love,
Keeley
(or Spi, whatever works.)

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#2 2013-04-08 19:09:04

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Re: Spider can actually write poems!

Very well written Spi!

 

#3 2013-04-08 19:18:22

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Aww!~ Cute! :D I love the wince part.


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#4 2013-04-09 05:21:58

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Really cool poem though... what's "sence" ^_^


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#5 2013-04-13 11:48:17

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I love it. :D Brilliant!


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#6 2013-04-13 14:40:28

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It's so pretty! I love your work!!


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#7 2013-04-14 00:53:39

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Re: Spider can actually write poems!

Thank you!

@ xemox: woops, typo. Fixed it now.


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#8 2013-04-14 13:14:34

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Re: Spider can actually write poems!

I like your poem, it's really nice :)


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#9 2013-05-28 20:32:27

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@Sanzia: Thank you!

Well, I'm not sure if many of you liked my first poem, but I'm gonna post a second one anyway.

Do Not Fear

I know you feel fear,
I know you might lose what you hold dear.

I know the sun has not come up,
I know the water has not yet filled your cup.

I know the sun brings joy,
I know being controlled makes you feel like a toy.

I know the stars are covered,
And just out of reach you hope is hovered.

But you must see what we are here for,
And our generation will be forever more.

But hope is not yet lost,
And we must fight no matter what cost.

I hear what they say,
How you aren't perfect in any way.

I know you hear what they state,
But your mind has an iron plate.

That iron plate protects who you are,
And who you are should be seen from afar.

Do not take heed to their lies,
And don't be afraid of their spies.

You are perfect in every way,
And you'll stay that way, for every day.     
                                                                    - Spi

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#10 2013-05-28 20:42:14

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Aw <3 I love the last part! Keep posting more!!


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#11 2013-05-28 20:50:56

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Thank you Malu! Should I dish them all out now?

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#12 2013-05-28 21:54:48

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YES!! <3


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#13 2013-05-28 22:05:26

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Okay.

If I Was...

If I was a bird,
I'd fly so high my chirps couldn't be heard.
If I was a fire,
My flames would forever go higher and higher.

If I was a thief,
My appearances would be brief.
If I was a king,
My people would happily sing.

If I was a flower,
My stem would be a strong tower.
If I was a book,
At my words, everyone would look.

If I was a queen,
My people's beauty would be seen.
If I was a song,
I would inspire you to stand strong.

Alas, I am but a man.
Still, I do what I can,
For you and me to be
The people who were born to be free.

If a rebellion is needed by some,
Then a rebellion will be done.
If a war is won,
Then a song about the warriors will be sung.

Forever my kingdom shall be free,
And people across the world would see
That we stand together as we must,
And in God we trust.                   - Spi


The Bird's Song

I saw a man with a bird
And the bird's lovely song I heard.

He told me of a land
With mountain, water, and desert sand.

Stories of brave people are told,
And there is glass, as fine as gold

There is a great King
And even now His people sing.

He sits on a throne,
And a golden robe for Him is sewn.

But He values not such treasures,
For He loves his billions of peoples beyond measures.

He stands higher,
And His eyes are a great fire.

His hair is blazing white,
And with him you do not have to fight.

Then the bird stopped his song,
But his silence was not long.

The man called me over
And told me the story was not over.

"You may or may not know of this Man,
But you should know everyone can."

I did not know what he meant, or if it was true,
But now I understand it, and I hope you can too.

I will not tell you, this riddle is for you to ponder,
But if you search, your answer will not hide much longer.
    - Spi


What Is It?

Lies.
That is what I hear.
That is what I fear.

Loss.
That is what I dread.
That is what spreads.

Illness.
That is what is to be.
Even that I can see.

No.
That is what I hate.
It puts me in a bad state.

But.
Is it good, or bad?
We don't know if you're happy or mad.

Yes.
This is joy.
Like a child who's been given a toy.

Trust.
What can you do without it?
Because of it, together we sit.

Hello.
What we want to hear,
From people we hold dear.

Good bye.
This is the bad part,
But it is also a new start.

Good bye.
                       - Spi


Medusa the Horrible

Medusa the Horrible,
Medusa the killer.
No one can stop her,
Can she live for ever?

Medusa the Clever,
Medusa the Tempting.
How can you understand her?
How can you be so excepting?

Forever horrifying,
Forever in tales.
She is undefeated,
She never fails.

Hair full of snakes,
Eyes cold as stone,
She is ugly but beautiful,
And her voice is an entrancing tone.

I yearn for the victory,
I long for the day
That I can kill her,
In some way.

Medusa the Horrible,
Medusa the killer.
No one can stop her,
Can she live for ever?

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#14 2013-05-29 13:11:28

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I can't choose a favorite! They're all just soo good applau


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#15 2013-07-04 23:32:40

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Thank you so much, Angel!

This one I made for Darky:
Stand Tall

No! Do not fear!
Do not let those thoughts come near!

No! Do not give up!
I have more water to fill your cup!

No! Do not wait!
For every day is the right date!

No! Do not fall!
For you stand tall!

I send you a letter,
Hoping my words will make you feel better.

But this is something you must do,
You must defeat this monster, just you.

But we are all here if you fall!
And if you need us, we will answer the call!

You are not alone!
And to call us, you don't need a phone!

We know who you by heart!
And We will never, ever part.


Live Your Life

Life is a delicate thing,
In which we can cry or sing.

There are the years when we're helpless.
Years that we dream of true love, and our first kiss.

There are the our years of why,
Why are we alive, why do we die?

There are our years of doubt,
Were we are angry, and we pout.

There are our years of learning,
We want to understand, and we are yearning.

There are our years of being strong,
These years are the most long.

Then we have our years of regret,
When we don't appreciate how our life was set.

Those are our last years,
The few decades everyone fears.

These are our worst days,
Because we regret our earlier ways.

But is it truly so bad,
The full and exiting life you had?

Even so, life your life fully,
Then you will like your life wholly.

Because you only have one,
So the things that you want, get them done!



It's Done

I guess it's done.
It's over, but it was fun.

I'll miss your smile.
It was your company that made it worth while.

What was your favorite part?
I personally liked the start.

What will I do now that this is over?
I've run out of my four leaf clovers.

I'll have too much free time,
But there aren't any more mountains to climb.

I guess I'm happy to be at rest,
But I like adventure the best.

But there's nothing more to do,
But I suppose those days are through.

Well, I'm grateful for what I had,
And also for what I have, I'm glad.

I guess I might be weak to be like this,
But I know I'm strong to keep going with so much to miss.

Well now, Good bye.
I'll miss you, but it's time to fly!

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