Doll: Bloodyemos
Character: Nyx
Book: Night by Elie Wiesel

Last edited by bloodyemos (2012-09-01 18:27:10)

Very good! I'll announce the winner at the end of September (If more people join... ) The length was fine. You can write as much as you want.

Now THIS, is more my kinda thing.

Doll name: amaryllis-love
Character: Zoye Descourde`s
Book: New Moon, Twilight Saga. (I FINALLY GET TO KILL BELLA AND THE SPARKLING DIAMOND) 

Last edited by amaryllis-love (2012-09-02 09:08:09)

Question. can we add stuff to the part that we already wrote if we think up of more to add.?

Okay here is my entry ~ I'm changing chapter 15 and 16.
Zoye's POV
I ran stumbling towards the beach where Bella was headed to today. It wasn't a nice day to be out on the beach. But then again, it's almost never a nice day to be out in Forks. A shame I have to watch her or else Charlie might get a heart attack if she does anything stupid. Like, say, jump off that huge cliff.
I just got back to Forks last night and this is what I'm faced with; a walking, breathing, non-feeling Living-dead half sister to watch over. Yep. Life couldn't be better. Sigh.
I was starting to feel restless when suddenly I heard a gut-wrenching high-pitched cry from the dangerous looking cliff. I looked up, up into the sky and saw a figure, not too gracefully falling down the cliff into the deep shadows of the monstrous waves.
I was paralyzed, my whole body went numb for god-knows how long, and then I saw another figure diving in head first into the waters, so gracefully that someone would have thought he belonged in the water. I was mesmerized by the sheer beauty of his (definitely a his) dive, that I didn't even notice that the rain was falling down too heavily to seek shelter.
Wanting to see for myself if he had survived his dive--and the first not so graceful one too of course--I forced myself to move towards the water. I lightly stepped around the upturned roots of the huge tree, and as I made my way just close enough for my feet to touch the water, I saw a figure--No, two figures making their way out to shore.
Understanding downed on me too late. I heard someone--myself let out an anguished cry as I saw the now limp body in the strong and lean man's arms.
"No no No..!" I couldn't breathe. I couldn't look away. I was desperately thinking of a way to bring her back, but I came up with nothing but more denial of what was happening in front of me.
As the man-no, Boy to be more precise, laid her gently down on the ground, I dropped down near her head and with shaking hands, tried cupping her fragile, almost breakable face. I heard soft whimpering, and broken sobs coming out of me. The rain was falling down so heavily that I couldn't even see her face. The boy was trying his hardest to bring her back, shouting words of encouragement, and pumping his fists on top of where her heart lay.
Out of nowhere, it seemed, Sam Uley showed up, wearing nothing but cut-off jeans (the boy was the same too) and grasped the boy by his shoulders and urged him to stop, I don't know why. All I could do was hold her face close to me and deny the fact that she's never coming back. Sam Uley said something to me, but I didn't have ears for him. I was numb, shut off from the whole world. Somebody grabbed my hands and pulled me back from her. I didn't even think to protest. I just didn't have the energy for it. I was so tired. All I wanted to do was lay down next to Bella and fall asleep. This person now started to carry me, so I thought I should protest, just a little bit.
I looked away from Bella long enough to focus on the person that was holding me up, half carrying me now. As I focused on his face, I saw a flicker of something, recognition pass through his eyes. Oh, it was that boy. Now that I had a chance to see him clearly, I looked, really looked at him. For a long time. It seemed as if he was doing the same to me, except he still had that look in his eyes, like he just realized something. His mouth was slightly opened, and I could see the attractive sleekness of his neck leading up to his even more attractive jawline. I forgot how to breathe, let alone why I even turned around in the first place.
Sam asked him to do something, take me away from here, it seemed, and he started to move back towards Billy Black's house. I suddenly recalled something. A childhood memory. Then it clicked. This boy, who was holding me now was Jacob Black.

Last edited by amaryllis-love (2012-09-03 14:08:04)

Ooh! Me too!
Doll name: Shiva
Character name: Alexa Starr
Book: Looking for Alaska

Now THIS is what I want!

Everyone has been added.

I have added you. And, to answer your question, at the end of this month (September). But, if you need, I can add a couple more days onto it.

Added you!

Thank you, Spiderwick!
Important news flash!
The deadline is approaching! Everyone who has entered, you have nine days left to write your entry! Thank you, and good luck!
*we now return to the regularly aired program*

It's over everyone! And the winners are...
1st place: amaryllis-love, with her twilight remix! Congratulations, you get a full story, and 20 votes!
2nd place: bloodyemos, with her Night remix! Congratulations, you get a short story and 20 votes!
3rd place: Spiderwick9, with her Wrath of Mulgrath remix! Congratulations, you get 20 votes!
Thank you, everyone who joined!
*edit*

I'll be out for a while. Don't be surprised if SPIDERWICK9 sends you  a private message about winning, your prize, etc. But don't worry, I'll be able to get the story(s) up by the 5th!

Last edited by mallorygoodwin (2012-10-01 22:43:26)

LOL. I knew Amary would win.