Well....I asked a moderator if I can post my song here and they say yes so here's a song I wrote,hope you guys like it :)
                                     I've been there before
Don't enjoy it too much
It's been my place from the very start
But I was really out of touche
Which makes it really obviouse
It's been like this; back and forth
And making me feel so ditched
And I didn't like it too much
And you know it's hurting me inside
But instade of crying I'm smiling it out
Do you know that one day I was just like you
Shinin,glowing each and every single day
Without a care in the world
Yeah I've been there before
Tasted it all,yeah
No matter how this is gonna be
Yeah I've there before (been there before)

Look at me; a true strengh is inside of me
Trying to break through everyday
Even at the simplest things I used to do best
You stole'em from me
Do you know that one day I was just like you
Shinin,glowing each and every day
Without any doubt of me
Yeah,I've been there before
Tasted it all,yeah
Been there before and
Now it's all gone

Just because you're up there
Doesn't mean I'm so down,so down
Just because I'm on my worst days
Doesn't mean I'm so done,so done
Yeah.........oh...........yeah (do you know?)

Do you know that one day I was just like you
Shinin,glowing all the time
Oh I've been there before
Oh yeah maybe it's all gone
Oh but I've been there before
I've been there before.

Ok so this is my song :) I want your honest opinion on it please.
If you have any question about the song or anything just ask and
REMEMBER you honest opinion :D thx

Last edited by sani (08-01-2013 16:33:31)